Thank you very much for considering this. My idea was that within the wax seal the name will be embossed inside, you have got the right idea but I feel that its slightly boring and a little empty.

I have updated my main response on the main thread, please have a look and consider the 'british' traditional trendy element to the design. Almost like bringing the 1940's to the 21st century. Trendy and new but traditional foundations.

Thanks.

Also I feel the design seems to be copied from google as opposed to you doing it from scratch with youre own unique take. I feel thats why it seems average, if you were to start from scratch then I dont feel it would look so poor.

That design was not copied from google. I never use google for images and I made it from scratch using Illustrator. I have my degree in graphic design and illustration and would never steal anothers artwork and post it as my own. It looks fuzzy and poor because of the file size we upload in and it's a jpeg as opposed to a high-resolution pdf or illustrator file.

I apologies if I caused any offence. The logos so far have been average and I am just concerned.